Monday, October 20, 2008

Melanie's Paper

Hello everyone! I recently took some time to look over Melanie's paper, which was incredibly powerful. It has such potential! I made some comments on certain aspects of the paper as well as some edits. If you would like to see my comments and/or edits. Please copy and paste or click this link: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dgsfcqf2_1hmrspzcm

1 comment:

MEL.M! said...

Hey, thanks for your feedback. The aspect of the child's voice was what I really needed most help with- that's why I was so anal about it. I'm glad you liked it and I hope you really "understood" it. I'll spill the beans Thursday before class :)

Thanks again & enjoy the rest of your week!